Beard

I was not to crazy about this essay as a whole.  I thought the ending was great but most of what happened in the beginning and middle of the essay was pointless and boring.  she starts off by talking about how her house has squirrels living in one of the bedrooms and how one of her dogs is dying and pees uncontrollably  throughout the whole essay she talks about her dog peeing everywhere which has nothing to do with the main focus of the plot.  There is little focus on gang Lu.  You only have an outsider's view on why he chose to do certain actions.  we know the full extent to the collie's medical conditions though.  I was really captivated towards the end of the story when the shootings started to unfold.  Final say: Not enough attention to the main plot.  The Side plots are a whole other story.